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Jubilee Books: You've just
had a new picture book entitled Snow Bears published by
Walker Books. What is the process of writing a book like
Snow Bears and typically how long does it take to write
a picture book?
Martin Waddell: It's very difficult to specify that.
When people talk about the process of bringing a book out
they think that you suddenly have the idea and then write
it, you don't. What happens is that ideas come together
that you've had from way back. I remember playing with my
own children, which is the genesis of this book, when I
was a house daddy looking after the three kids for a number
of years. After that I began to write these very young books
and I remembered this business of pretending that they're
not there, everyone's played that game with their kids.
The art of a picture book is to take things that children
can identify with and form a story for them.
The catch of working with an
artist is that there are dozens of people out there producing
beautiful pictures but you need to have a story which will
tie the pictures together. People buy a picture book because
of the pictures, if they take the book home and the kids
look at the book and nothing grips them or it doesn't relate
to their lives it goes on the shelf. The book they can feel
relates to them in some way is the one that gets taken out,
chewed by the dog, kept under the pillow and battered. To
do that you have to have something at the heart of the book
that children can identify with.
In this particular book I'm
aiming at two things. One is the idea of together, something
they share with the parent. I'm also aiming at this idea
of pretending not to be yourself. From my point of view
I think it was that idea that came to me first and I was
thinking of a situation I could use that idea in. I think
I went through 15 draughts and then we've been fiddling
with it for about a year and a half. I set up a book to
the point where the story is clear, the basic lines are
clear, the illustrator then draws. I don't have input into
that and it's very important that I don't.
Does the story ever change after the illustrations have
been finished?
No, the story doesn't change but the detail of how that's
portrayed and worked on the page, where the words go and
how many words you use changes. You often loose words because
the illustrator would have picked up the emotion you're
trying to get.
When I write a 60, 000 word teenage novel, which takes
a lot less time than a 500 word picture book, I'd have had
plenty of room to expand upon all the background lives of
the characters. When I'm doing a picture book I've got 400
or 500 hundred words, I've got to have a beginning, middle
and an end. I've got to have what I call the Wuthering Heights
moment which is the moment children can identify with.
In this book the smallest bear has been manfully trying
to play these snowball games and getting colder and colder.
She finally has to say I can't play and I want to go home.
That's actually the Wuthering Heights moment because children
can identify with that, they also can identify with the
older children who are a little bit irritated by that. It's
an emotional situation. So a picture book needs a beginning,
middle and an end, identifiable characters, a Wuthering
Heights thing and a chorus line that kids can pick up on.
I object to the idea that picture books are used as a pushy
education tool, but it should come naturally. If you're
reading that book and you run your finger along 'we aren't
here mummy bear' the children are seeing those words repeated
and the children will repeat that line and that's the beginning
of reading, so the chorus line is there for that purpose.
The example I would use if I were talking to kids is 'the
little girl cried in the Grandmothers chair'. Now if I said
that to you, whether you loved your granny or hated your
granny you'd probably instantly have some picture of your
grandmothers chair. Say your grandmother supported
Glasgow Celtic and she drank Guinness all the time and she
bet on the horses, there'd be a racing post by the chair
and a pint of Guinness on the table beside and so on. Where
if I say my Grandmother sat on a red rocking chair by a
second floor window of a room that looked out onto a tree
with birds on it, that's what you would draw for me, but
there'd be no life in it. If you draw something in your
own conscious you will create a world that has depth.
If you look at the pictures in Snow Bears for instance,
there's three little spoons hung up on the fireplace. The
illustrator has thought her way into those bears, there's
no mention of spoons in my text. I need to send very strongly
the emotional setting of the story, what the turning points
will be and the artists then interprets that and I go back
and reinterpret the pictures in words. I spent three days
in the last fortnight arguing about two, three word sentences,
in the end we had to take four pages to pieces and reconstruct
them to get these few little phrases in.
There's a line in Owl Babies 'And she came. Soft and silent,
she swooped through the trees to Sarah, Percy and Bill.'
But one of the first drawings Patrick Benson did was a magnificent
illustration of an owl in full flight which is very powerful
and very comforting for the children and requires the full
spread of the page, and if you put the full line of text
on the page you would destroy the effect the artist has
created. So we simply had the words 'And she came' on the
page and created another page for 'Soft and silent, she
swooped through the trees'. There was no reason to believe
you'd need to structure the book in that way until you'd
seen the spread.
You also write books for teenagers. What are the main
differences between writing for teenagers and younger children?
I write for teenagers the same way as I write for 3 year
olds. The only difference between writing for children and
writing for adults is that when you're writing for children
you are writing for minds that you know are unformed and
will, in part, be formed by what they read. A picture book
is the first experience of many aspects of the world. As
they grow older and they experience more things you're writing
against a backdrop of knowledge of the world, but it's a
limited knowledge and a limited emotional ability to respond
to it, so you cannot offer despair in a book for children.
This is the borderline between books for children and books
for adults. If you're writing for children there must always
be an element of hope in the story. When you write for adults
it's an open door, you take it that the people are capable
of responding to the text and analysing what it's about.
When you write for a seventeen-year-old you're not quite
so sure of that.
A lot of teenagers will already be reading adult books
although there are children's writers, Melvin Burgess for
example, who do appeal to a teenage market. In that context
do you find teenagers a difficult audience to write for?
I don't find it difficult to do, but I don't necessarily
know how well children respond. The only indication I have
is if the books sell well or not and happily mine have gone
on selling. We talk about the innocence of children and
there's a great hoo-ha when someone like Melvin Burgess
touches a difficult area, and we sit down the same children,
who are supposed to be so innocent, in front of Eastenders,
which depicts a world of no real consequences. Real life
isn't like Eastenders and someone like Burgess or myself
will spend several years working on a small scenario where
the consequences do play out and people are hurt. This is
a window of real life and then you get criticized for being
serious about it. How this can be done in a society that
quite likes to sit children down in front of Eastenders
is beyond me. The truth of the matter is that we are facing
children with huge adult problems in silly contexts.
Fantasy writing is a very popular genre at the moment.
Why do you think this is?
I think people like big adventures. People have always liked
swash buckling stories, nothing new there. This is a particular
turn of the fashion wheel and I'm delighted that it's taken
the form of books.
One of the big problems is that people will take a serious
slow moving novel like mine to a child who is not remotely
interested and has never had the idea that books are interesting.
I think that to get children interested in books you first
of all have to go to their interests. If you've got a ten
year old who won't read but spends all day with his bicycle,
then get him a book about bicycles, a book that demonstrates
how to fix it. That way he associates the book with something
valuable, after that he may associate the book with fun,
and then with a deeper understanding. People are drawn into
books often through something they like or enjoy.
I don't really like fantasy writing but it really doesn't
matter if it gets kids interested in books.
How did you become a writer?
I suppose I never really wanted to work for a living, I
wanted to be a professional footballer and I came over to
London and got signed into the Fulham Youth squad but I
got chucked out at the end of the season. That meant I had
to work for a living and I got a job on an antique stall.
I'd always loved stories and come from a family with a
long theatrical tradition. So I started to write then and
I tell children I talk to now that you should always write
something that really matters to you.
So in my case I had left my girlfriend back home and I
wrote about being back home in Ireland. The stories I was
writing were of reasonable quality but weren't of publishable
quality and I had an agent who said to me that you're writing
these gloomy Irish books about being 15 in Ireland and in
fact you're 22 and living in England and you're telling
me hilarious stories every day about what you did at the
market, why don't you write me a book against that background?
At the time spy stories were quite popular and he suggested
that we write a spy story combined with my experiences at
the antique market. I wrote a book called 'Otley' and it
was like a dream debut. The first book I write a film company
came in and bought it and I made enough money to go home
to Ireland and start writing. I wrote a few books with the
same character without really getting anywhere. Then I wrote
a book which was completely different called 'In A Blue
Velvet Dress' in 1972 which is almost a pastiche of a Victorian
Ghost story and that was my first book for children.
It's what I want to do and I'm happy when I'm writing and
not happy when I'm not writing. It is an obsessive thing,
no sane person would do it.
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